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Scoot's avatar

Really cool how you almost learn more about the other characters from the other perspectives. Picture starting to fill in BUT STILL INCOMPLETE SMH

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J. M. Allen's avatar

I love the little hints of a possible redemption coming up for these three. I worry that Ariel was more directly involved in her sister's death than she lets on.

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Leah | Blessed Endurance's avatar

The conversation flows and stories are shared on a day of feasting. Love that little detail.

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E.B. Howard's avatar

I'm enjoying this so much!! Watching their relationships develop is amazing and it's so neat to see the difference in perspective. It's so well-written too.

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

Rehabilitation? WAIT A MINUTE

I have a new theory and it's going to be wild if it's right

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Bridget Riley's avatar

This was so good! I love getting one character’s perspective on someone else and then waiting to read that person’s version of what happened - the difference between them is so revealing!

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