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Scoot's avatar

Really cool how you almost learn more about the other characters from the other perspectives. Picture starting to fill in BUT STILL INCOMPLETE SMH

J. M. Allen's avatar

I love the little hints of a possible redemption coming up for these three. I worry that Ariel was more directly involved in her sister's death than she lets on.

Leah | Blessed Endurance's avatar

The conversation flows and stories are shared on a day of feasting. Love that little detail.

E.B. Howard's avatar

I'm enjoying this so much!! Watching their relationships develop is amazing and it's so neat to see the difference in perspective. It's so well-written too.

Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

Rehabilitation? WAIT A MINUTE

I have a new theory and it's going to be wild if it's right

Bridget Riley's avatar

This was so good! I love getting one character’s perspective on someone else and then waiting to read that person’s version of what happened - the difference between them is so revealing!