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just mud by Ron's avatar

That felt accurate! A good read, Sara!

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Cork Hutson's avatar

Interesting read from the other guy's perspective.

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Scoot's avatar

I love “crunches” because they are long enough to really flesh out, but short enough to be restrictive. This was fun and read like it was way more than 250 words! Well done!

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Sara Dietz's avatar

It’s not nearly as self-contained as I think it “should be” - have you finished reading all the final challenges yet? - but it was fun to write!

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Scoot's avatar

Well if you continue to write 250 word stories you will quickly get a sense of how to rush through beginning, middle, and end! I still reach for cliff hangers in lieu of resolution.

I am embarrassed to say I have not finished reading everything yet, but Im marching through it! Im taking my sweet time but the post on Saturday will not be delayed!

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Sara Dietz's avatar

No thats actually better if you didn’t catch a tie in and it still made sense!

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Scoot's avatar

!!!!!

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