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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

Now I'm getting paranoid; I don't trust Sarah, Peter, the doc; I don't think I trust the *pen* at this point!

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Scoot's avatar

Couldn’t have said it better myself!

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Julie's avatar

Ahhh it’s great to read your story, Sara!

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S.E. Reid's avatar

I'm so stressed. 😂 The way you've captured Leah's paranoia is really effective. It often seems like an overreaction, but then it's clear that not all is well...is she right to be so anxious??

Ooft, I'm hooked!

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Janel's avatar

I'm loving these chapters - keeping me second guessing everyone

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

The paranoia increases, the pulse pounds

Did she pay the late fee? Did she not

Take her meds, get her shots, take a nap

It's worth a shot.

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Ann Gauger's avatar

I love this. Bad paranoia, good paranoia--relief then anxiety again, and we have to wait a week?

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