Love Sarah's tactics, hope she and Natalie are okay, and wondering what's going to happen next! Nice dramatic reveal. Of course, now I wonder, what are they actually doing?
Mind is RACING. The intensity really picked up, I like this a lot. You ended like halfway through what i was processing as an action sequence, or maybe the start of one. CAN NOT WAIT for the next episode
Love Sarah's tactics, hope she and Natalie are okay, and wondering what's going to happen next! Nice dramatic reveal. Of course, now I wonder, what are they actually doing?
The plot thickens, and I'm hooked.
Need more story, need more plot.
Thoughts run rampant, Thoughts run wild,
Running fast like a hopped up child.
Who's that guy? nice save by Sarah
Leave by the side door, get out now.
So sarah and ?? Now I'm suspicious of Natalie. BTW I saw something you might want to fix. It made me smile though. lots of trains to walk,
Thanks for catching this typo, Ann! I really appreciate it! You know those trains, always trying to get their steps in for the day ;)
And you can tellI read your chapter for real!
And I have a tremor and I miss typos all the time.
Mind is RACING. The intensity really picked up, I like this a lot. You ended like halfway through what i was processing as an action sequence, or maybe the start of one. CAN NOT WAIT for the next episode
Threy can be pesky things, those trains, especially when they are real words and spell check doesn't catch them!