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Love the "oh, crap" moment at the end and the well-meaning teen who brought his health insurance along with his car insurance.

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Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!

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Oof, if I were in Leah's position, that would weird me out, I can tell you. Looking forward to next week for sure!

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Thanks Michael!

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I am absolutely in. Waiting until Saturday each week is going to be agony, lol. I can’t wait to see where this story goes!

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Glad you enjoyed it, Chantal! Reading serialized fiction has been such a fun Substack experience, and I’m glad to have you along for the ride as I try my hand at it!

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Taking the time to read this now that the whole thing is up! Looking forward to it :)

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Yay! Thanks!

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Of course! (Currently seven chapters in, will share thoughts when I've read it all!)

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I'm coming to this late, so I don't have to wait for the next chapter! Even so, the suspense... great start, and a great way to end the chapter.

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Thanks Dan! Glad to have you joining!

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“I didn’t tell Sarah I’d rescheduled my appointment.” I was so wrapped up in the story it took me a moment to realize! I can’t wait to catch up on the rest of the episodes

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Eep, glad you enjoyed it, Maya! Thanks for reading!

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It’s so good! I’m binging the episodes now

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I'm re-reading this and so far, so good.

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Sep 11, 2023Liked by Sara Dietz

OH MAN. THEY DON'T KNOW DO THEY. THEY DON'T KNOW!! I'm worried that I KNOW!

This is gonna be a blast!

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So glad you enjoyed it! Looking forward to sharing (and writing lol) the rest!

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